Module One Skype Discussion 16/04/18

Earlier this week I had a Skype discussion which was really helpful when it comes to thinking about the essay. I had already received my essay back with feedback which I was pleased with and I'm looking forward to getting back stuck in and editing it and re-drafting it to create the best work I can.

During the skype discussion Adesola mentioned loads of things that were 'lightbulb' moments for me. For anyone who missed the discussion I will just bullet point these points below-

QUOTES

• Quotes must be on a separate line and have the date not just the author
• Remember the bibliography must be in ALPHABETICAL order
• If the quote is long make sure you add page numbers in
• You must reference even IDEAS of someone else
• Don't use a quote to speak for you - make your point and use the quote to back it up
• REMEMBER - The idea of a quote is so the reader can go and read the literature from where the quote is (LEAVING A BREADCRUMB TRAIL)
• Have a look at https://www.citethemrightonline.com/

YOUR ESSAY

• The essay is about MY practice rather than an essay creating universal statements
• The essay should not be a module overview
• Explain your practice at the start of the essay - the reader knows what the module is about but doesn't know what your practice is about
• Work out what theories you have learnt apply to your practice and don't be afraid to miss out the ones that don't apply - remember it is about your practice and ALL the theories that you have learnt will enhance your writing anyway

APPENDIX

• The appendix is EXTRA
• Most people wont have time to read the appendix so you cant rely on it
• Make your point WITHOUT appendix and make sure the essay makes sense without it

Hope this makes sense for people. The lightbulb moment for me was knowing I don't have to include all the theories I have learnt. My first draft was far too many words and I was finding it difficult to cut it down but now I know I can find what is really relevant to my practice and make the essay focus more on myself rather than discussing the whole module.